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punkow/service/templates/index.html

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 {% extends 'base.html' %}
 
 {% block body %}
-    <p class="lead">
-        Book appointments in the berlin authorities more easy!
-    </p>
+    <p class="lead">Book appointments with the Berlin authorities more easily!</p>
+
     <div class="alert alert-danger">
-        <strong>Notice:</strong> This is a private side-project!
-        No support provided and no commercial use allowed. Please read the <a href="/terms">terms</a>!
+        <strong>Notice:</strong> This is a private side-project! No support provided and no commercial use allowed.
+        Please read the <a href="/terms">terms</a>!
     </div>
 
-    <p>Appointment booking in the Berlin authorities can be really frustrating.
-    Appointments go available at different tims and are often booked out shortly after.
-    For a successful booking you have to click yourself constantly for months through their service.
-    This is almost impossible for working people.</p>
+    <p>
+        Appointment booking with the Berlin authorities can be really frustrating. Appointments become available at
+        different times and are often booked out shortly after. For a successful booking you have to click 'refresh'
+        constantly for days or months and this is almost impossible for working people.
+        This service tries to help you with this problem. You select a service that you want to book the appointment for
+        and
+        a location where you want to book it and retrieve the booking-link-address. Simply copy and paste it into the
+        Punkow
+        form, together with your name and your email address and from this point on Punkow will check at regular
+        intervals
+        (every 5 minutes) if there is a free appointment and if so, will book it on your behalf.
+        It will do this for up to 30 days. After this period your request will be cancelled if there is still no
+        appointment
+        available.</p>
 
-    <p>This service tries to help with this problem.
-    You select a service where you want to book the appointment for and a location where you want to book it and retrieve the booking-link-address.
-    This you enter this together with your name and your email address in this service.
-    From this point on it will check in regular intervals if there is a free appointment and if so, books it on your behalf.</p>
+    <h4>INSTRUCTIONS:</h4>
 
-    <p>The maximum time to try is 30 days.
-    After this period your request gets cancelled if there is still no appointment available.</p>
+    <p>Keep Punkow (<a href="https://punkow.jonesinski.de">punkow.jonesinski.de</a>) open and open a new window of your
+        internet browser.</p>
 
-    <p>The necessary URL can be found at the websites of the "Terminbuchungssystem" at service.berlin.de.
-    Select your service at: <a href="https://service.berlin.de/dienstleistungen/" target="_blank">https://service.berlin.de/dienstleistungen/</a>
-    and copy the "link address" of the "Termin buchen" link for the location you want to go.</p>
+    <p>Select the service you want to book at: 
+        <a href="https://service.berlin.de/dienstleistungen/" target="_blank">https://service.berlin.de/dienstleistungen/</a>
+        e.g. Einbuergerung (under letter E)</p>
+    <p></p>
+
+
+    <p>Look for a location that offers online booking – you will see 'Termin Buchen' on the right side of the page.
+        NB: Although many things can be done at any Amt, some services will only be offered at an Amt in your Wohnbezirk
+        (the area where you registered when you moved there) – please check before you attempt to make your booking.</p>
+    <p>Right click on 'Termin Buchen' at the location you want to book.</p>
+    <p>Left click 'Adresse des Links kopieren” or “Copy Link Address” and click to open the Punkow window again.</p>
+    <p>Click on the blue box at the bottom of the page “Register your request now!” and past the link address into the
+        first box “Start URL”.</p>
+
+    <p>Fill in the rest of the form with your name and email address, accept the terms of this service and hey presto,
+        your
+        request is now active.</p>
+
+    <p>The Punkow system will not be able to book specific appointments, but it will search for the next available
+        appointment at your chosen location. You will receive a confirmation from the Amt itself (not from Punkow) and
+        this
+        will allow you to cancel the appointment if it is not convenient for you. If you want to try again, you can set
+        up a
+        new request, but please do not enter more than one request for the same service in the same location at the same
+        time.</p>
 
     <div class="alert alert-warning">
         <strong>Notice:</strong> The requests will be processed in the order they came in.
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     </div>
 
     <p>
-        <a href="/create" class="btn btn-outline-primary col align-self-center" role="button">Register your request now!</a>
+        <a href="/create" class="btn btn-outline-primary col align-self-center" role="button">Register your request
+            now!</a>
     </p>
 {% endblock %}